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Alone in the dark
Freezing from the cold
Crying for the love
The love I thought was real,
The love you freely gave me,
The love that you took back.
Alone in the dark
Freezing from the cold
Crying for the love
The cold that took over your soul
The cold that crept into your heart
The cold that showed in your eyes that day
Alone in the dark
Freezing from the cold
Crying for the love
The dark seperates us from those we hold dear
The dark isolates us in fear
The dark that makes us so alone
Freezing from the cold
Crying for the love
The love I thought was real,
The love you freely gave me,
The love that you took back.
Alone in the dark
Freezing from the cold
Crying for the love
The cold that took over your soul
The cold that crept into your heart
The cold that showed in your eyes that day
Alone in the dark
Freezing from the cold
Crying for the love
The dark seperates us from those we hold dear
The dark isolates us in fear
The dark that makes us so alone
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good poem. could be improved. I've read some good stuff on deviant.. needs more punch. I read about 7 of your poems, they're all good. Just need to be juice up. Imagery and impact. This is just my opinion, and is not intended to offend joo. :-D Thanks for the fav.